The Viewer: Should Tristan ....

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This week we have been studying about the book The Viewer.

Today in class we did a conscience alley a conscience alley is when you have to sides of yes do it or no don't do it, then we had someone walk down the alley and both sides would give their opinion.

Then we did a padlet and we had to type what our opinion was.

 

Here is the LINK to the padlet

The Viewer Poem - People Don't Care About The World

Hi Blog World!
This week we have been posting about The Viewer (a book).
This is a Poem about the part when Tristan come's across a DUMP and we had to write a poem about it.

I was walking down the path and it started to get dark

I tripped over a piece of mouldy film

I had fell into a hole of disgusting garbage

All I could see is that people did not care of pollution

I heard children crying because they did not  have a roof under their heads

I saw a mysterious light I thought it would be good

I brought the children with me to the light

My 4 Sentence Recount

Guten tag Everybody,
This term we are going to be writing all sorts of writing.
Here is my 4 sentence recount about my holidays.
I hope you enjoy.
Sorry if you can't really read the writing.

Have You Ever Wondered What That Fire Red Ball In Space Is?

                                                          

In Week 5 of Term 2 our class focussed on how to write great information reports.

We wrote about the planet Mars as we are in the middle of learning about Planet Earth and Beyond. Learning how to write a great information report will help us with our self-guided topics in a few weeks time.

Here is my writing, after I have self-assessed and peer-assessed my work.

Introduction

Mars is a red planet. It’s named after the Roman god a war, it is the fourth planet in our solar system. This report will tell you all the knowledge you need to know about Mars.

Appearance

Mars has a very different appearance to Earth. Did you know that Mars has a lot of volcanos? The biggest volcano on Mars is called

(Olympus Mons also know as Mount Olympus.) Mars is very hot due to how close the sun is to it but Mars can also be very freezing.  Fascinating fact Mars’ has a hard iron core. In addition Mars is very dry due that it is very close to the sun, that dryness leads to a very hard crust on the planet Mars. Mars has the biggest canyon in the entire solar system, Valles Marines. Scientist think that there might of been rivers in the past on Mars.                                 

                                                               This is what a dust storm looks on Mars (remember they last for months)         

Could humans live on Mars

Mars is inhospitable planet, which is uninhabitable for humans to try live on Mars. On Mars there are often dust storms and they last about

for months, and for a human to live on Mars it would be pretty difficult.

There is a little bit of oxygen (02) and possibly a little bit of (H20) on

Mars, Mars has a thin atmosphere, which causes a that little bit oxygen (02) . On Mars there is no magnetic field so it allows radiation from the sun which means the, UV RAYS makes you get skin cancer. If you had tried to live on Mars beware what will come ahead of you.

Mars’ Moon This is what Phobos and Deimos look. (Don’t you think they do look strange.)

Mars’ is circled by two tiny non illuminated moons called Phobos and Deimos. The moons are strangely shaped like lumpy potatoes. Furthermore, Phobos and Deimos are smaller than our Moon. Additionally the moons have weak gravity, the weak gravity causes them not to pull force for them to orbit.

Conclusion

Now you have some key and fascinating information about Mars, our closest neighbour. If you want to find out more about Mars, then you might want to visit http://www.planetsforkids.org/planet-mars.html. I hope this information report has encouraged you to perhaps write your own.

Week 4 Reflection

Week 4 Reflection-Hunter


 What: This week I had a reading group lesson about the book War games and we were identifying the authors purpose also finding evidence to support my thinking and to look for clues ( inference ) in the text. 


So What: It helps us to understand the text. Also to think beyond surface features of the story. However you also make connections with your prior knowledge.


 Now What: I can use this strategy when I read other texts. It also improves on my learning and I get the hang of identifying the authors purpose.


Hello Everyone,

I had a great time doing this and it also helps me to improve in on my learning.
It also helps to achieve my Key Competency Goal.

Personification Poem

The water chatters like a tree shaking.

Water desires more splash in the water.

The water thinks it listens like a wise bird flapping gracefully in the transparent sky.

The water grows fear.

The water is strong and wavy.

This my Personification Poem it's when you write about something that isn't human and you write like it acts human.

Emotion Poem

Happiness

Happiness is shining yellow

Tastes like a cherry red lollipop

Happiness smells like red rose's delicately moving in the breeze

It sounds like people being generous and cheerful

Happiness looks like people having peace and quiet

Happiness feel like being you

Hi this my Emotion Poem that I did in class. An Emotion Poem is when you choose an emotion and you write about what colour it is, what it tastes like, what it smells like, what sounds like, looks like and last of all what it feels like. I had lots fun writing this.

Poetry

In Flox class we have been writing different kind's of poetry.
This is my Diamante poem and they call it a Diamante poem,
because is is shaped like a diamond.

Day

Sunny, bright

Playing, rolling, running

Sun, morning, moon, night

Sleeping, tiring, resting

Dark, stars

Night

Happy

Sweet, peaceful

Smiling, thrilling, delighting

Joyful face, into a melancholic face

Crying, weeping, depressing

Blue, miserable

Sad

Walking

Slow, taking my time

Moving, creeping, sneaking

Walking slowly then running faster

Accelerating, sprinting, speeding

Fast, rapid

Running

100 Word Challenge

One day there were three men who were construction builders and investigators they were building a new park for the children because they didn't have one near Town Hall in the City.There names were Mykel,Roman and Jorel they were brothers.They were called in from there investigator's job to find what happened to the Chocolate Egg Forest.When they were investigating one of the eggs exploded.Then more chocolate eggs kept exploding and chocolate was everywhere it was nearly going to cover the whole town.So they kept investigating what was happening and they failed so they told the whole town to go and find another town and they did.