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Friday, 15 May 2015

My DLO about First Up



G'day everybody,
This is my reading DLO, that I did with Toma, Nisha and Sinead.
It's about astronauts and just a bit of little facts about them.
I hope you enjoy!

8 comments:

  1. Hi,Hunter
    WOW!!! I really like you DLO and the great facts.I also really like your facts about Ham Chimp it hooked me in.
    What is your fav slide?
    By:Jasman

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  2. Bom Dia Jasman,
    My favourite slide would have to be Ham Chimp and Neil Armstrong's qoute.
    Thank you for commenting

    Hunter

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    1. Hi,Hunter
      I really like the Ham Chimp slide it hooked me in to read more.
      What was so good about it to you?
      By:Jasman

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    2. Hi,Hunter
      I really like the Ham Chimp slide it hooked me in to read more.
      What was so good about it to you?
      By:Jasman

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  3. Kia ora Hunter,
    You have some interesting facts here! I wonder if you looked at your Level 3 Target sheet for Writing if you and your team would have achieved the goal of using higher level/ambitious vocabulary or a variety of higher level sentence openers?
    What do you think?

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  4. Hi Mrs Kingston,
    Thank you for commenting on my blog.
    Well that's not one of my goals for writing but I think it should be.
    I also want to thank my class mates for helping me with the presentation.

    Hunter

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  5. well done about the planets maybe next time add more

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  6. Hey Hunter! This is really nice although could you tell us the source where you got all this next time?
    - Rayed from Canada

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